Saturday, April 2, 2016

Editorial Report A

I've modified my introduction to the topic of my writing in Physics podcast to better introduce myself and establish credibility.

Old version
New version

I added a slight ethos appeal in mentioning my Major and university.  I hadn't introduced myself or established my credibility well enough before.

I added a backing track from here to give the audio a better overall texture and retain listener attention.  The track doesn't seem to be playing in the version linked.

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