Production Report B

This is a link to the intro section of my writing in Physics Podcast;


https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5LknFx8QunJa0FseUxYRlktM0U/view?usp=sharing

These are the sections of my outline it was drawn from;

Opener Line

• Clearly introduce self and topic.
• Snappy.
• With Personality- sets tone and gives a reason to keep listening.

   Subject Intro

• Define scope- any professional writing in a physics career.
• Not just research papers.
• Give some idea of research done- establish credibility, do not overdue- that would be boring and pointless.
• Reason to care? -Physics is awesome?

I had to change this section quite a bit to make it really work as a podcast. The most major change was how I added a more through topic introduction to the very beginning to serve as a bit of a hook before my opener. I decided that beginning with the opener just didn't feel like a podcast to me and I remembered that many podcasts I tend to listen to have a section before the opener.

I was also unable to fit the research bullet point in in a way that didn't feel clunky and awkward.