I reviewed Ben Barnett's QRG on the Fukushima nuclear disaster. I chose Ben's project because his controversy presents many of the same challenges as mine. Both are fairly technical and thus require significant explanation of complex topics to appeal to a wide audience.
Reading Ben's QRG reminded me of how I need to better explain the technical concepts behind the Time Crystal. It's easy to miss some critical piece of background that most readers won't already know. Specifically, I noticed several statistics in Ben's text that I had no prior understanding of.
Ben's QRG quickly and gracefully outlined the impact of his controversy and laid out the stakes. I need to work on this within my own QRG; as it stands, I don't effectively illustrate the the impact of the topic. Ben also gives the entire pieces a subtle narrative flow that helps pull the reader through.
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