Friday, February 12, 2016

Peer Review 2

    I recently reviewed  Alec Eulano's Podcast on Tyler the Creator.  Alec's Podcast reminded me of how I need to make my own project more engaging.

    Currently my project suffers from a lack of a narrative through-line, an insufficient explanation of the time crystal itself, and a lack of any reference points in time.


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